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Lesson 4 of 7 · about 16 minutes

Two-Column Scripts with Timing

You'll be able to

  • Format a video spot as a two-column AV script with a running time column
  • Format a radio spot with speaker labels, SFX and music cues
  • Time each line so the whole spot lands at exactly 30 seconds
  • Leave room for a sponsor line and supers that meet size and duration rules

A script is a plan everyone on the job can read: the client, the voice, the editor, the station's traffic person. Video spots use a two-column layout. Radio spots use a single column with speaker labels. Both carry a running time so the plan fits the clock before anyone books a studio.

The two-column AV script

Left column: what we see. Right column: what we hear. Each row is one moment where they line up. A third, narrow column on the far left holds the running time, the second where that row starts.

Shorthand you will see in nearly every script:

  • WS, MS, CU, ECU: wide shot, medium shot, close-up, extreme close-up
  • VO: voiceover, the voice heard while the speaker is off screen
  • SOT: sound on tape, a person on camera speaking with their own audio
  • SUPER: text over picture, written exactly as it should appear
  • SFX: sound effect
  • MUSIC UP / UNDER / OUT: music louder, music under the voice, music ends

Write supers in the script exactly, character for character. The editor will type what you wrote, typos and all.

Full example: video :30

The invented Delmar County road bond, Measure 4, for TV and online pre-roll. Sponsor: the invented committee Delmar Roads Yes. Timing assumes a relaxed VO at about 2 words per second, with gaps for shots to land.

"Twice a Day" :30 video

TimeVideoAudio
0:00WS, early morning. Yellow school bus approaches a narrow concrete bridge over an irrigation canal. Mist over the water.MUSIC: soft acoustic guitar bed, under.
SFX: bus engine, distant.
0:03CU, bridge rail. Concrete crumbling, rebar showing through.VO: The Miller Road bridges were rated poor in the last state inspection.
0:08MS, through the bus window. Kids with backpacks. Bridge rail sliding past.VO: School buses cross them twice a day.
0:11WS, pickup bouncing through a pothole on a two-lane road. Grain elevator in background.
SUPER: MEASURE 4
SFX: tire thump.
VO: Measure 4 rebuilds eleven miles of Miller Road and replaces both bridges.
0:17Graphic: simple map of Miller Road, the 11 mile stretch drawn in, two bridge icons.
SUPER: ABOUT $4 A MONTH ON A TYPICAL HOME
VO: About four dollars a month on a typical home.
0:21WS, same bridge, late afternoon. The bus crosses back.
SUPER: VOTE TUESDAY, NOV. 3
VO: Vote Tuesday, November third.
MUSIC: swells slightly.
0:25End card: plain background.
SUPER: YES ON MEASURE 4
DelmarRoads.org
SUPER (bottom, at least 4% of picture height): Paid for by Delmar Roads Yes, Treasurer Ann Kessler
ANNCR: Paid for by Delmar Roads Yes.
MUSIC: resolves, out at 0:29.20.
0:30END

VO word count: 44. Announcer: 6. The end card holds 5 full seconds, which keeps the sponsor super on screen past the 4 second minimum with a little margin.

Read the rows top to bottom and notice the timing math. The problem (the bridge and the buses) takes 8 seconds. The solution and cost take 10. The action takes 4. The sponsor card takes 5. If the problem section had swollen to 14 seconds, you would see it in the time column before shooting a frame.

Also notice that no VO line describes its picture. The bus is on screen, so the voice says "twice a day." The map shows the road, so the voice gives the cost. That is the say-see rule from lesson 3, working.

About that sponsor super

FCC rule 47 CFR 73.1212 requires a TV station to identify the sponsor of a political ad about a candidate with letters at least 4 percent of the vertical picture height, on screen at least 4 seconds. On a 1080 line picture, 4 percent is about 43 pixels of letter height. A ballot measure ad is not a candidate ad, but the station still has to identify who paid, and Idaho Code 67-6614A says the person responsible for a political ad must be "clearly indicated." Using the 4 percent, 4 second standard for every political or issue ad is the simplest habit. Lesson 6 covers all of these rules together.

The treasurer's name in the example is a common practice in some places, shown here as an option. Check what your state actually requires.

The radio script

Radio uses one column. Each line starts with who or what makes the sound: the voice, the announcer, SFX or MUSIC. Times go in the left margin. Write numbers the way you want them spoken: "November third," not "Nov. 3."

"You Know the Spot" :30 radio

TimeSourceCopy and cues
0:00SFXPickup truck interior, road noise. A hard THUMP as a tire hits a pothole. Coffee cup rattles in the holder.
0:02DRIVER(older man, dry, not angry) Every morning. Same hole.
0:04MUSICLight acoustic bed, under.
0:04VOMiller Road. You know the spot.
0:07VOTwo bridges on Miller? Rated poor by state inspectors. School buses cross them twice a day.
0:13VOMeasure 4 rebuilds eleven miles of Miller Road and replaces both bridges. About four dollars a month on a typical home.
0:20VOMeasure 4. Vote Tuesday, November third.
0:23ANNCRPaid for by Delmar Roads Yes.
0:26SFXSmooth road hum, no thump. Driver, satisfied: Huh.
0:29MUSICOut clean at 0:29.50.

Total spoken words: 60, including the driver's lines. At about 2.4 words per second that is 25 seconds of talk, leaving about 4 seconds for the pothole, the music and the button at the end. Any more copy and this spot gets rushed. The measure name is said three times. The date is said once with its day of the week. Rewrite if the read-through runs past 29.5 seconds.

The last sound effect is a button: a short beat after the tag that pays off the opening. The pothole at the top, the smooth road at the end. It costs two seconds and makes the spot feel finished. If the time is tight, the button goes before any message line does.

Order matters here. A federal candidate's TV ad must show the written approval statement at the end (lesson 6), and some stations simply prefer the paid-for-by line last. If a rule or a station wants the sponsor line as the final words, put the button before the tag instead.

Timing a script before recording

  1. Read the script aloud at a relaxed pace with a stopwatch, including pauses for sound effects. Do it three times and take the middle time.
  2. Write the running time at the start of each line.
  3. If the total runs over 29 seconds for a :30, cut words. Do not plan to speed up the read or squeeze the file later.
  4. Mark where the music must end. A :30 should be silent or fading to nothing a fraction before 30.00 so the station's automation does not clip a note.

The AV craft chapter on frames and time explains how editors count time in frames, which matters when the spot must be exactly :30.00 (lesson 7).

Checklist

  • Video script has time, video and audio columns
  • Every super is written exactly as it should appear
  • Sponsor super is at least 4 percent of picture height and up at least 4 seconds
  • Radio script names the source on every line: voice, ANNCR, SFX, MUSIC
  • Numbers written the way they should be spoken
  • Read-through times out under the spot length with room to spare

Try it

Write a full :30 video script and a full :30 radio script for the invented Harlow Library levy from lesson 1, using the brief you filled out.

  1. Video: use the three-column table format. At least six rows. Include supers for the levy name, cost, election date and a sponsor super on the end card held for at least 4 seconds.
  2. Radio: use the source-and-copy format. Say "library levy" at least three times. Include at least one sound effect that sets a scene in under two seconds.
  3. Time both with a stopwatch, three read-throughs each, and fill in the running time column.
  4. Record a scratch read of the radio script on your phone. Bring it into SoundStudio and check the length on the waveform. If you want to lay the video script against rough shots, VideoStudio will let you block it out in the browser.

Check yourself

1. In a two-column AV script, what goes in the left column?

2. Why add a running time to each row?

3. Under FCC rule 47 CFR 73.1212, how must a TV station show the sponsor of a political ad about a candidate?

4. Your :30 radio script times out at 32 seconds on the read-through. What should you do?

5. What does 'VO' mean in a script?

Terms in this lesson

AV script
A two-column script with video on the left and audio on the right, one row per moment.
VO
Voiceover: narration heard while the speaker is not on screen.
SOT
Sound on tape: a person on camera speaking their own words, with their own audio.
Running time
The clock position where a row starts, used to check pacing on paper.
Bed
Music that plays under the voice for most or all of a spot.

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